Lover’s ideal

To love is it just an experience?

Or is it just our senses?

Love is what we hear, taste, smell, feel, and see

We hear our own heart beating heavily

Taste becomes more edible

Anything you touch becomes more relaxing

Your world becomes more shiny and beautiful

Yes! it is also our sense and experiences

This poem is responding to the poem called Mathnawi III, 1417-1424. In Mathnawi III, 1417-1424, it’s trying to communicate to us that love is just our experience but I don’t agree with it. Being in love changes your perspective in my opinion. Love can’t be just our experiences but it also has to be our own senses too. Love can make you feel differently from right now. I wrote this poem because some people think love is a experience in life that just only make us do things differently. Like how in the poem Mathnawi III, 1417-1424 said that there will be no secrets, love isn’t just only that. Love could be a new life our a new cooked fish we tasted for the first time. It changes our view on the world including our 5 senses.

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